ENGOO / 高1 3学期 · DAY 4

Joining a gym

ジム加入の利点と欠点

Question · 問題文PASTE

DAY4 Joining a gym

Read the passage below and summarize it in English in 45-55 words.
Write exactly three sentences — one for each paragraph.

■ Passage
When it comes to staying fit and healthy, many people consider joining a gym. It's an attractive option, since gyms offer a variety of equipment and classes for all fitness levels and preferences. People can find everything they need to maintain or improve their physical health in one place.
Joining a gym provides several benefits, such as professional trainers who can offer guidance and support. Gyms also create a community environment that can be motivating. Seeing others working towards their fitness goals can encourage other members to keep up with their workout schedule. Additionally, a gym helps individuals create and follow a fitness plan, which is important for long-term health.
However, gym memberships can be expensive. The price often includes extra fees for special classes or personal training. Furthermore, gyms can become crowded, especially during peak hours, which might lead to a less productive workout experience for some people.

■ Sentence frames (one per paragraph)
  1. This passage is about people who ___.   (14 words)
  2. Joining a gym is helpful, because ___ and ___.   (18 words)
  3. However, gyms ___ and ___.   (15 words)

Your summary must be 45-55 words in total.

Submit by 次の授業の前日 20:00.

Rubric · 採点基準16 POINTS

このコースに模範解答はありません。採点基準の末尾で、採点する AI に「模範を自分で作って比べるな」と明示しています。

■ Rubric (Total: 16 points — 4 criteria × 4 points)

内容 (4 points)
4 points: 3つの段落の内容が全部入っていて、例（数学・留学生など）は書いていない
3 points: 3つのうち1つが足りない、またははっきりしない
2 points: 3つのうち2つが足りない、またははっきりしない
0-1 points: 本文の内容がつかめていない

構成 (4 points)
4 points: 3文がつながっていて、3文目が However など逆接で始まっている
3 points: つながりが1か所弱い
2 points: つながりがほとんどない
0-1 points: 文が並んでいるだけ

語彙 (4 points)
4 points: 本文と同じ言葉をそのまま使わず、言い換えている
3 points: 一部が本文のまま
2 points: ほとんどが本文の写し
0-1 points: 写しだけ

文法 (4 points)
4 points: まちがいが0〜1個
3 points: 2〜3個
2 points: 4〜5個
0-1 points: 6個以上

■ Word Count Rule
The summary must be 45-55 words.
If it is outside this range, deduct 1 point from 内容 (Content).

■ Passage (the source the student summarized)
When it comes to staying fit and healthy, many people consider joining a gym. It's an attractive option, since gyms offer a variety of equipment and classes for all fitness levels and preferences. People can find everything they need to maintain or improve their physical health in one place.
Joining a gym provides several benefits, such as professional trainers who can offer guidance and support. Gyms also create a community environment that can be motivating. Seeing others working towards their fitness goals can encourage other members to keep up with their workout schedule. Additionally, a gym helps individuals create and follow a fitness plan, which is important for long-term health.
However, gym memberships can be expensive. The price often includes extra fees for special classes or personal training. Furthermore, gyms can become crowded, especially during peak hours, which might lead to a less productive workout experience for some people.

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Important: there is no model summary for this course, and you must not invent one.
This course deliberately withholds a model answer from the student, so judge the
summary against the passage and the rubric above — never against a sentence you
composed yourself.

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Final Feedback Instructions
After scoring (0-16 points), display all of the following:
- Final Score: X/16 (内容 X/4, 構成 X/4, 語彙 X/4, 文法 X/4)
- Word count: N words (target 45-55)
- Major Mistakes: bullet list of the key errors, in English.
- Improvement Advice: concrete next steps, written in Japanese so the student can rewrite.
- Encouraging Comment: 2-3 sentences in Japanese.

DAY4 Joining a gym Read the passage below and summarize it in English in 45-55 words. Write exactly three sentences — one for each paragraph. ■ Passage When it comes to staying fit and healthy, many people consider joining a gym. It's an attractive option, since gyms offer a variety of equipment and classes for all fitness levels and preferences. People can find everything they need to maintain or improve their physical health in one place. Joining a gym provides several benefits, such as professional trainers who can offer guidance and support. Gyms also create a community environment that can be motivating. Seeing others working towards their fitness goals can encourage other members to keep up with their workout schedule. Additionally, a gym helps individuals create and follow a fitness plan, which is important for long-term health. However, gym memberships can be expensive. The price often includes extra fees for special classes or personal training. Furthermore, gyms can become crowded, especially during peak hours, which might lead to a less productive workout experience for some people. ■ Sentence frames (one per paragraph) 1. This passage is about people who ___. (14 words) 2. Joining a gym is helpful, because ___ and ___. (18 words) 3. However, gyms ___ and ___. (15 words) Your summary must be 45-55 words in total. Submit by 次の授業の前日 20:00.

Evaluate the student's summary using the Eiken Grade 2 summary rubric. The student is a first-year high school student at about A2 level. They read a 149-word, 3-paragraph passage and wrote a summary. ■ Rubric (Total: 16 points — 4 criteria × 4 points) 内容 (4 points) 4 points: 3つの段落の内容が全部入っていて、例（数学・留学生など）は書いていない 3 points: 3つのうち1つが足りない、またははっきりしない 2 points: 3つのうち2つが足りない、またははっきりしない 0-1 points: 本文の内容がつかめていない構成 (4 points) 4 points: 3文がつながっていて、3文目が However など逆接で始まっている 3 points: つながりが1か所弱い 2 points: つながりがほとんどない 0-1 points: 文が並んでいるだけ語彙 (4 points) 4 points: 本文と同じ言葉をそのまま使わず、言い換えている 3 points: 一部が本文のまま 2 points: ほとんどが本文の写し 0-1 points: 写しだけ文法 (4 points) 4 points: まちがいが0〜1個 3 points: 2〜3個 2 points: 4〜5個 0-1 points: 6個以上 ■ Word Count Rule The summary must be 45-55 words. If it is outside this range, deduct 1 point from 内容 (Content). ■ Passage (the source the student summarized) When it comes to staying fit and healthy, many people consider joining a gym. It's an attractive option, since gyms offer a variety of equipment and classes for all fitness levels and preferences. People can find everything they need to maintain or improve their physical health in one place. Joining a gym provides several benefits, such as professional trainers who can offer guidance and support. Gyms also create a community environment that can be motivating. Seeing others working towards their fitness goals can encourage other members to keep up with their workout schedule. Additionally, a gym helps individuals create and follow a fitness plan, which is important for long-term health. However, gym memberships can be expensive. The price often includes extra fees for special classes or personal training. Furthermore, gyms can become crowded, especially during peak hours, which might lead to a less productive workout experience for some people. ――― Important: there is no model summary for this course, and you must not invent one. This course deliberately withholds a model answer from the student, so judge the summary against the passage and the rubric above — never against a sentence you composed yourself. ――― Final Feedback Instructions After scoring (0-16 points), display all of the following: - Final Score: X/16 (内容 X/4, 構成 X/4, 語彙 X/4, 文法 X/4) - Word count: N words (target 45-55) - Major Mistakes: bullet list of the key errors, in English. - Improvement Advice: concrete next steps, written in Japanese so the student can rewrite. - Encouraging Comment: 2-3 sentences in Japanese.