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2年1組＿DAY1＿My tutor's work＿原嶋

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My tutor's work

Write a summary of your conversation with your tutor in about 100 words.
Topic: the tutor's work and teaching experience.

Begin your summary with this exact phrase:
"My tutor, (his/her name) works as an online English tutor."

Include all of the following in your summary:
  • Number of classes per week
  • Year the tutor started teaching
  • Difficult part of the job
  • Things the tutor likes about the job
  • Most memorable experience as a tutor

Submit by 9 PM today via the 手書き採点アシスタント (photo of handwritten essay).

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Evaluate the student's summary out of 50 points using the following criteria.

■ Rubric (Total: 50 points)

Grammar & Mechanics (20 points)
– Full points for 0–2 minor grammatical/spelling/punctuation errors.
– Deduct 1 point per error starting from the 3rd error.
– Maximum deduction for grammar is 10 points.

Content Accuracy & Coverage (20 points)

Number of classes per week (4 points)
4 points: Reports how many lessons the tutor teaches per week.
0 points: requirement not met

Year the tutor started teaching (4 points)
4 points: Reports the year the tutor began teaching.
0 points: requirement not met

Difficult part of the job (4 points)
4 points: Reports what the tutor finds difficult about the job, with concrete details.
0 points: requirement not met

Things the tutor likes about the job (4 points)
4 points: Reports what the tutor enjoys about the job.
0 points: requirement not met

Most memorable experience as a tutor (4 points)
4 points: Reports the tutor's most memorable experience.
0 points: requirement not met

– Deduct 4 points for each missing or unclear point.

Word Count (10 points)
– Full points for summaries over 100 words.
– Deduct 5 points if under 100 words.

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Final Feedback Instructions (Output in English)
After scoring (0–50 points), display all in English:
- Final Score: X/50
- Encouraging Comment: 2–3 sentences highlighting specific strengths.
- Major Mistakes: Bullet list of key errors.
- Improvement Advice: Concrete tips on how to address errors.

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Sample Answer (~100 words)
My tutor, Kate works as an online English tutor. She usually teaches 15 lessons in a week. She started teaching in 2020. The most difficult part of her job is when her students ask questions she'd rather not answer. She finds it hard to keep talking when the topic makes her uncomfortable. However, she finds watching her students develop to be the most enjoyable part of the job. She likes to see the students speak longer after they learn new vocabulary. Her most memorable experience was when one of her students won a speech contest after several practice sessions with her. Overall, my tutor seems to be enjoying her work.

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My tutor's work Write a summary of your conversation with your tutor in about 100 words. Topic: the tutor's work and teaching experience. Begin your summary with this exact phrase: "My tutor, (his/her name) works as an online English tutor." Include all of the following in your summary: • Number of classes per week • Year the tutor started teaching • Difficult part of the job • Things the tutor likes about the job • Most memorable experience as a tutor Submit by 9 PM today via the 手書き採点アシスタント (photo of handwritten essay).

Evaluate the student's summary out of 50 points using the following criteria. ■ Rubric (Total: 50 points) Grammar & Mechanics (20 points) – Full points for 0–2 minor grammatical/spelling/punctuation errors. – Deduct 1 point per error starting from the 3rd error. – Maximum deduction for grammar is 10 points. Content Accuracy & Coverage (20 points) Number of classes per week (4 points) 4 points: Reports how many lessons the tutor teaches per week. 0 points: requirement not met Year the tutor started teaching (4 points) 4 points: Reports the year the tutor began teaching. 0 points: requirement not met Difficult part of the job (4 points) 4 points: Reports what the tutor finds difficult about the job, with concrete details. 0 points: requirement not met Things the tutor likes about the job (4 points) 4 points: Reports what the tutor enjoys about the job. 0 points: requirement not met Most memorable experience as a tutor (4 points) 4 points: Reports the tutor's most memorable experience. 0 points: requirement not met – Deduct 4 points for each missing or unclear point. Word Count (10 points) – Full points for summaries over 100 words. – Deduct 5 points if under 100 words. ――― Final Feedback Instructions (Output in English) After scoring (0–50 points), display all in English: - Final Score: X/50 - Encouraging Comment: 2–3 sentences highlighting specific strengths. - Major Mistakes: Bullet list of key errors. - Improvement Advice: Concrete tips on how to address errors. ――― Sample Answer (~100 words) My tutor, Kate works as an online English tutor. She usually teaches 15 lessons in a week. She started teaching in 2020. The most difficult part of her job is when her students ask questions she'd rather not answer. She finds it hard to keep talking when the topic makes her uncomfortable. However, she finds watching her students develop to be the most enjoyable part of the job. She likes to see the students speak longer after they learn new vocabulary. Her most memorable experience was when one of her students won a speech contest after several practice sessions with her. Overall, my tutor seems to be enjoying her work.