2年1組_DAY1_Customs and cultural differences_原嶋
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Topic: a custom and an important holiday in the tutor's country
2年1組_DAY1_Customs and cultural differences_原嶋
Customs and cultural differences Write a summary of your conversation with your tutor in about 100 words. Topic: a custom and an important holiday in the tutor's country. Begin your summary with this exact phrase: "My tutor, (his/her name) told me about the customs in (country)." Include all of the following in your summary: • One custom in the tutor's country • When people follow the custom • Why the custom exists • An important holiday in the country • How the holiday is celebrated Submit by 9 PM today via the 手書き採点アシスタント (photo of handwritten essay).
Evaluate the student's summary out of 50 points using the following criteria. ■ Rubric (Total: 50 points) Grammar & Mechanics (20 points) – Full points for 0–2 minor grammatical/spelling/punctuation errors. – Deduct 1 point per error starting from the 3rd error. – Maximum deduction for grammar is 10 points. Content Accuracy & Coverage (20 points) One custom in the tutor's country (4 points) 4 points: Reports one specific custom practiced in the tutor's country. 0 points: requirement not met When people follow the custom (4 points) 4 points: Reports when or where people follow that custom (occasion, place, or time of year). 0 points: requirement not met Why the custom exists (4 points) 4 points: Reports the reason or origin the tutor gives for the custom. 0 points: requirement not met An important holiday in the country (4 points) 4 points: Reports the name of an important holiday in the tutor's country. 0 points: requirement not met How the holiday is celebrated (4 points) 4 points: Reports at least one concrete thing people do to celebrate that holiday. 0 points: requirement not met – Deduct 4 points for each missing or unclear point. Word Count (10 points) – Full points for summaries over 100 words. – Deduct 5 points if under 100 words. ――― Final Feedback Instructions (Output in English) After scoring (0–50 points), display all in English: - Final Score: X/50 - Encouraging Comment: 2–3 sentences highlighting specific strengths. - Major Mistakes: Bullet list of key errors. - Improvement Advice: Concrete tips on how to address errors. ――― Sample Answer (~100 words) My tutor, Ana told me about the customs in Spain. One custom there is greeting friends with two kisses on the cheek. People follow it whenever they meet someone they know, especially at parties or family gatherings. They do the same thing when they say goodbye. According to my tutor, this custom started because it shows that you are treating the other person like family. She also told me about Three Kings Day, which is an important holiday in Spain. On that day, children receive presents in the morning and families eat a special ring-shaped cake with a toy inside. Overall, I found that greetings in Spain are much closer than in Japan.