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2年1組＿DAY2＿Shopping habits＿原嶋

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Shopping habits

Write a summary of your conversation with your tutor in about 100 words.
Topic: the tutor's shopping habits.

Begin your summary with this exact phrase:
"My tutor, (his/her name) told me about his/her shopping habits."

Include all of the following in your summary:
  • Where the tutor usually shops
  • How often the tutor goes shopping
  • Something the tutor bought recently
  • Store or online, and the reason
  • The most expensive thing the tutor has bought

Submit by 9 PM today via the 手書き採点アシスタント (photo of handwritten essay).

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Evaluate the student's summary out of 50 points using the following criteria.

■ Rubric (Total: 50 points)

Grammar & Mechanics (20 points)
– Full points for 0–2 minor grammatical/spelling/punctuation errors.
– Deduct 1 point per error starting from the 3rd error.
– Maximum deduction for grammar is 10 points.

Content Accuracy & Coverage (20 points)

Where the tutor usually shops (4 points)
4 points: Reports where the tutor usually goes shopping.
0 points: requirement not met

How often the tutor goes shopping (4 points)
4 points: Reports how often the tutor goes shopping (times per week or month).
0 points: requirement not met

Something the tutor bought recently (4 points)
4 points: Reports one specific item the tutor bought recently.
0 points: requirement not met

Store or online, and the reason (4 points)
4 points: Reports which the tutor prefers — a store or online — AND the reason given.
0 points: requirement not met

The most expensive thing the tutor has bought (4 points)
4 points: Reports the most expensive thing the tutor has ever bought.
0 points: requirement not met

– Deduct 4 points for each missing or unclear point.

Word Count (10 points)
– Full points for summaries over 100 words.
– Deduct 5 points if under 100 words.

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Final Feedback Instructions (Output in English)
After scoring (0–50 points), display all in English:
- Final Score: X/50
- Encouraging Comment: 2–3 sentences highlighting specific strengths.
- Major Mistakes: Bullet list of key errors.
- Improvement Advice: Concrete tips on how to address errors.

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Sample Answer (~100 words)
My tutor, Mark told me about his shopping habits. He usually shops at a small supermarket near his apartment for food, and he goes to a mall for clothes. He goes to the supermarket about three times a week, but he visits the mall only once a month. Recently he bought a coffee machine because he drinks coffee every morning. He prefers shopping online because it saves time and he can compare prices without leaving his house. The most expensive thing he has ever bought is his car, which he bought five years ago. Overall, he shops online more often than I do.

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Shopping habits Write a summary of your conversation with your tutor in about 100 words. Topic: the tutor's shopping habits. Begin your summary with this exact phrase: "My tutor, (his/her name) told me about his/her shopping habits." Include all of the following in your summary: • Where the tutor usually shops • How often the tutor goes shopping • Something the tutor bought recently • Store or online, and the reason • The most expensive thing the tutor has bought Submit by 9 PM today via the 手書き採点アシスタント (photo of handwritten essay).

Evaluate the student's summary out of 50 points using the following criteria. ■ Rubric (Total: 50 points) Grammar & Mechanics (20 points) – Full points for 0–2 minor grammatical/spelling/punctuation errors. – Deduct 1 point per error starting from the 3rd error. – Maximum deduction for grammar is 10 points. Content Accuracy & Coverage (20 points) Where the tutor usually shops (4 points) 4 points: Reports where the tutor usually goes shopping. 0 points: requirement not met How often the tutor goes shopping (4 points) 4 points: Reports how often the tutor goes shopping (times per week or month). 0 points: requirement not met Something the tutor bought recently (4 points) 4 points: Reports one specific item the tutor bought recently. 0 points: requirement not met Store or online, and the reason (4 points) 4 points: Reports which the tutor prefers — a store or online — AND the reason given. 0 points: requirement not met The most expensive thing the tutor has bought (4 points) 4 points: Reports the most expensive thing the tutor has ever bought. 0 points: requirement not met – Deduct 4 points for each missing or unclear point. Word Count (10 points) – Full points for summaries over 100 words. – Deduct 5 points if under 100 words. ――― Final Feedback Instructions (Output in English) After scoring (0–50 points), display all in English: - Final Score: X/50 - Encouraging Comment: 2–3 sentences highlighting specific strengths. - Major Mistakes: Bullet list of key errors. - Improvement Advice: Concrete tips on how to address errors. ――― Sample Answer (~100 words) My tutor, Mark told me about his shopping habits. He usually shops at a small supermarket near his apartment for food, and he goes to a mall for clothes. He goes to the supermarket about three times a week, but he visits the mall only once a month. Recently he bought a coffee machine because he drinks coffee every morning. He prefers shopping online because it saves time and he can compare prices without leaving his house. The most expensive thing he has ever bought is his car, which he bought five years ago. Overall, he shops online more often than I do.