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2年1組＿DAY4＿Sports in the tutor’s country＿原嶋

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Sports in the tutor’s country

Write a summary of your conversation with your tutor in about 100 words.
Topic: sports in the tutor's country.

Begin your summary with this exact phrase:
"My tutor, (his/her name) told me about sports in (country)."

Include all of the following in your summary:
  • Three popular sports in the country
  • A sport the tutor liked or disliked at school
  • A famous athlete from the country
  • The tutor's own experience in a competition
  • Whether the tutor has been to a stadium

Submit by 9 PM today via the 手書き採点アシスタント (photo of handwritten essay).

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Evaluate the student's summary out of 50 points using the following criteria.

■ Rubric (Total: 50 points)

Grammar & Mechanics (20 points)
– Full points for 0–2 minor grammatical/spelling/punctuation errors.
– Deduct 1 point per error starting from the 3rd error.
– Maximum deduction for grammar is 10 points.

Content Accuracy & Coverage (20 points)

Three popular sports in the country (4 points)
4 points: Reports three sports that are popular in the tutor's country.
0 points: requirement not met

A sport the tutor liked or disliked at school (4 points)
4 points: Reports one sport the tutor liked or disliked at school AND the reason.
0 points: requirement not met

A famous athlete from the country (4 points)
4 points: Reports the name of a famous athlete from the tutor's country.
0 points: requirement not met

The tutor's own experience in a competition (4 points)
4 points: Reports whether the tutor has taken part in a sports competition, with a detail.
0 points: requirement not met

Whether the tutor has been to a stadium (4 points)
4 points: Reports whether the tutor has been to a sports stadium and what they watched (or would like to watch).
0 points: requirement not met

– Deduct 4 points for each missing or unclear point.

Word Count (10 points)
– Full points for summaries over 100 words.
– Deduct 5 points if under 100 words.

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Final Feedback Instructions (Output in English)
After scoring (0–50 points), display all in English:
- Final Score: X/50
- Encouraging Comment: 2–3 sentences highlighting specific strengths.
- Major Mistakes: Bullet list of key errors.
- Improvement Advice: Concrete tips on how to address errors.

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Sample Answer (~100 words)
My tutor, Joy told me about sports in the Philippines. Three popular sports there are basketball, boxing and volleyball. At school she disliked running long distances because she got tired quickly, but she liked volleyball because she could play it with her friends. A famous athlete from her country is Manny Pacquiao, a boxer whose name almost everyone knows. She has taken part in a volleyball tournament at her high school, and her team finished third. She has also been to a stadium in Manila, where she watched a basketball game two years ago. Overall, basketball seems much more popular there than in Japan.

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Sports in the tutor’s country Write a summary of your conversation with your tutor in about 100 words. Topic: sports in the tutor's country. Begin your summary with this exact phrase: "My tutor, (his/her name) told me about sports in (country)." Include all of the following in your summary: • Three popular sports in the country • A sport the tutor liked or disliked at school • A famous athlete from the country • The tutor's own experience in a competition • Whether the tutor has been to a stadium Submit by 9 PM today via the 手書き採点アシスタント (photo of handwritten essay).

Evaluate the student's summary out of 50 points using the following criteria. ■ Rubric (Total: 50 points) Grammar & Mechanics (20 points) – Full points for 0–2 minor grammatical/spelling/punctuation errors. – Deduct 1 point per error starting from the 3rd error. – Maximum deduction for grammar is 10 points. Content Accuracy & Coverage (20 points) Three popular sports in the country (4 points) 4 points: Reports three sports that are popular in the tutor's country. 0 points: requirement not met A sport the tutor liked or disliked at school (4 points) 4 points: Reports one sport the tutor liked or disliked at school AND the reason. 0 points: requirement not met A famous athlete from the country (4 points) 4 points: Reports the name of a famous athlete from the tutor's country. 0 points: requirement not met The tutor's own experience in a competition (4 points) 4 points: Reports whether the tutor has taken part in a sports competition, with a detail. 0 points: requirement not met Whether the tutor has been to a stadium (4 points) 4 points: Reports whether the tutor has been to a sports stadium and what they watched (or would like to watch). 0 points: requirement not met – Deduct 4 points for each missing or unclear point. Word Count (10 points) – Full points for summaries over 100 words. – Deduct 5 points if under 100 words. ――― Final Feedback Instructions (Output in English) After scoring (0–50 points), display all in English: - Final Score: X/50 - Encouraging Comment: 2–3 sentences highlighting specific strengths. - Major Mistakes: Bullet list of key errors. - Improvement Advice: Concrete tips on how to address errors. ――― Sample Answer (~100 words) My tutor, Joy told me about sports in the Philippines. Three popular sports there are basketball, boxing and volleyball. At school she disliked running long distances because she got tired quickly, but she liked volleyball because she could play it with her friends. A famous athlete from her country is Manny Pacquiao, a boxer whose name almost everyone knows. She has taken part in a volleyball tournament at her high school, and her team finished third. She has also been to a stadium in Manila, where she watched a basketball game two years ago. Overall, basketball seems much more popular there than in Japan.