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2年1組＿DAY5＿How the tutor spends free time＿原嶋

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How the tutor spends free time

Write a summary of your conversation with your tutor in about 100 words.
Topic: how the tutor spends free time.

Begin your summary with this exact phrase:
"My tutor, (his/her name) told me how he/she spends his/her free time."

Include all of the following in your summary:
  • The device the tutor uses, and why
  • How often the tutor goes to the movies
  • The tutor's favorite TV program
  • How the tutor spends weekends
  • Outdoor activities the tutor does

Submit by 9 PM today via the 手書き採点アシスタント (photo of handwritten essay).

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Evaluate the student's summary out of 50 points using the following criteria.

■ Rubric (Total: 50 points)

Grammar & Mechanics (20 points)
– Full points for 0–2 minor grammatical/spelling/punctuation errors.
– Deduct 1 point per error starting from the 3rd error.
– Maximum deduction for grammar is 10 points.

Content Accuracy & Coverage (20 points)

The device the tutor uses, and why (4 points)
4 points: Reports which device the tutor uses to watch videos AND the reason.
0 points: requirement not met

How often the tutor goes to the movies (4 points)
4 points: Reports how often the tutor goes to the movies.
0 points: requirement not met

The tutor's favorite TV program (4 points)
4 points: Reports the tutor's favorite TV program with at least one detail about it.
0 points: requirement not met

How the tutor spends weekends (4 points)
4 points: Reports what the tutor does on weekends or in free time.
0 points: requirement not met

Outdoor activities the tutor does (4 points)
4 points: Reports whether the tutor does outdoor activities and names at least one (or reports that they do none).
0 points: requirement not met

– Deduct 4 points for each missing or unclear point.

Word Count (10 points)
– Full points for summaries over 100 words.
– Deduct 5 points if under 100 words.

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Final Feedback Instructions (Output in English)
After scoring (0–50 points), display all in English:
- Final Score: X/50
- Encouraging Comment: 2–3 sentences highlighting specific strengths.
- Major Mistakes: Bullet list of key errors.
- Improvement Advice: Concrete tips on how to address errors.

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Sample Answer (~100 words)
My tutor, Ana told me how she spends her free time. She usually watches videos on her laptop because the screen is bigger than the one on her phone and she can see the subtitles clearly. She goes to the movies only two or three times a year, usually when a big film comes out. Her favorite TV program is a cooking show in which chefs have to make a dish in thirty minutes, and she has learned a few recipes from it. On weekends she cleans her apartment in the morning and meets her friends for coffee. She also goes hiking once a month with her brother. Overall, she spends more time outdoors than I do.

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How the tutor spends free time Write a summary of your conversation with your tutor in about 100 words. Topic: how the tutor spends free time. Begin your summary with this exact phrase: "My tutor, (his/her name) told me how he/she spends his/her free time." Include all of the following in your summary: • The device the tutor uses, and why • How often the tutor goes to the movies • The tutor's favorite TV program • How the tutor spends weekends • Outdoor activities the tutor does Submit by 9 PM today via the 手書き採点アシスタント (photo of handwritten essay).

Evaluate the student's summary out of 50 points using the following criteria. ■ Rubric (Total: 50 points) Grammar & Mechanics (20 points) – Full points for 0–2 minor grammatical/spelling/punctuation errors. – Deduct 1 point per error starting from the 3rd error. – Maximum deduction for grammar is 10 points. Content Accuracy & Coverage (20 points) The device the tutor uses, and why (4 points) 4 points: Reports which device the tutor uses to watch videos AND the reason. 0 points: requirement not met How often the tutor goes to the movies (4 points) 4 points: Reports how often the tutor goes to the movies. 0 points: requirement not met The tutor's favorite TV program (4 points) 4 points: Reports the tutor's favorite TV program with at least one detail about it. 0 points: requirement not met How the tutor spends weekends (4 points) 4 points: Reports what the tutor does on weekends or in free time. 0 points: requirement not met Outdoor activities the tutor does (4 points) 4 points: Reports whether the tutor does outdoor activities and names at least one (or reports that they do none). 0 points: requirement not met – Deduct 4 points for each missing or unclear point. Word Count (10 points) – Full points for summaries over 100 words. – Deduct 5 points if under 100 words. ――― Final Feedback Instructions (Output in English) After scoring (0–50 points), display all in English: - Final Score: X/50 - Encouraging Comment: 2–3 sentences highlighting specific strengths. - Major Mistakes: Bullet list of key errors. - Improvement Advice: Concrete tips on how to address errors. ――― Sample Answer (~100 words) My tutor, Ana told me how she spends her free time. She usually watches videos on her laptop because the screen is bigger than the one on her phone and she can see the subtitles clearly. She goes to the movies only two or three times a year, usually when a big film comes out. Her favorite TV program is a cooking show in which chefs have to make a dish in thirty minutes, and she has learned a few recipes from it. On weekends she cleans her apartment in the morning and meets her friends for coffee. She also goes hiking once a month with her brother. Overall, she spends more time outdoors than I do.