Joining a gym

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Joining a gym

Read the passage below and summarize it in English in 45-55 words.
Write exactly three sentences — one for each paragraph.

■ Passage
When it comes to staying fit and healthy, many people consider joining a gym. It's an attractive option, since gyms offer a variety of equipment and classes for all fitness levels and preferences. People can find everything they need to maintain or improve their physical health in one place.
Joining a gym provides several benefits, such as professional trainers who can offer guidance and support. Gyms also create a community environment that can be motivating. Seeing others working towards their fitness goals can encourage other members to keep up with their workout schedule. Additionally, a gym helps individuals create and follow a fitness plan, which is important for long-term health.
However, gym memberships can be expensive. The price often includes extra fees for special classes or personal training. Furthermore, gyms can become crowded, especially during peak hours, which might lead to a less productive workout experience for some people.

■ Sentence frames (one per paragraph)
1. This passage is about ___. (14 words / 何についての文章かを1文で言う。「設備や教室の種類」の説明は落として、「健康のためにジムに入る人がいる」だけ残す。)
2. ___ is helpful, because ___ and ___. (18 words / 良い点を2つ言う。「トレーナーの助言」と「他のメンバーとのやる気の出る雰囲気」の2つに絞り、「運動計画を立てて続ける」という3つ目の利点は落とす。)
3. However, ___ and ___. (16 words / 悪い点を2つ言う。However で逆接に折り返すこと。「特別クラスの追加料金」は「値段が高い」にまとめ、「ピーク時に混雑する」ことも添える。)

Your summary must be 45-55 words in total.

Submit by 9 PM today via the 手書き採点アシスタント (photo of handwritten summary).

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Evaluate the student's summary using the Eiken Grade 2 summary rubric.
The student read a 149-word, 3-paragraph passage and wrote a summary.

■ Rubric (Total: 16 points — 4 criteria × 4 points)

内容 (4 points)
4 points: All three paragraph points are present, and specific examples are correctly left out.
3 points: One of the three points is missing or unclear.
2 points: Two of the three points are missing or unclear.
0-1 points: The summary does not capture the passage.

構成 (4 points)
4 points: The three sentences connect logically, and a contrast marker (However / On the other hand) marks the turn.
3 points: The connection is weak in one place.
2 points: Almost no connection between sentences.
0-1 points: Sentences are simply listed with no logical order.

語彙 (4 points)
4 points: Key expressions are paraphrased rather than copied from the passage.
3 points: Some expressions are copied from the passage.
2 points: Most of the summary is copied from the passage.
0-1 points: The summary is a copy of the passage.

文法 (4 points)
4 points: 0-1 errors.
3 points: 2-3 errors.
2 points: 4-5 errors.
0-1 points: 6 or more errors.

■ Word Count Rule
The summary must be 45-55 words.
If it is outside this range, deduct 1 point from 内容 (Content).

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Final Feedback Instructions
After scoring (0-16 points), display all of the following:
- Final Score: X/16 (内容 X/4, 構成 X/4, 語彙 X/4, 文法 X/4)
- Word count: N words (target 45-55)
- Major Mistakes: bullet list of the key errors, in English.
- Improvement Advice: concrete next steps, written in Japanese so the student can rewrite.
- Encouraging Comment: 2-3 sentences in Japanese.

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Model Summary (3 sentences)
This passage is about people who join a gym to stay fit and healthy. A gym is helpful, because trainers give guidance and other members create a community that keeps people motivated. However, memberships can be expensive with extra fees and gyms often become crowded at peak hours.

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Joining a gym Read the passage below and summarize it in English in 45-55 words. Write exactly three sentences — one for each paragraph. ■ Passage When it comes to staying fit and healthy, many people consider joining a gym. It's an attractive option, since gyms offer a variety of equipment and classes for all fitness levels and preferences. People can find everything they need to maintain or improve their physical health in one place. Joining a gym provides several benefits, such as professional trainers who can offer guidance and support. Gyms also create a community environment that can be motivating. Seeing others working towards their fitness goals can encourage other members to keep up with their workout schedule. Additionally, a gym helps individuals create and follow a fitness plan, which is important for long-term health. However, gym memberships can be expensive. The price often includes extra fees for special classes or personal training. Furthermore, gyms can become crowded, especially during peak hours, which might lead to a less productive workout experience for some people. ■ Sentence frames (one per paragraph) 1. This passage is about ___. (14 words / 何についての文章かを1文で言う。「設備や教室の種類」の説明は落として、「健康のためにジムに入る人がいる」だけ残す。) 2. ___ is helpful, because ___ and ___. (18 words / 良い点を2つ言う。「トレーナーの助言」と「他のメンバーとのやる気の出る雰囲気」の2つに絞り、「運動計画を立てて続ける」という3つ目の利点は落とす。) 3. However, ___ and ___. (16 words / 悪い点を2つ言う。However で逆接に折り返すこと。「特別クラスの追加料金」は「値段が高い」にまとめ、「ピーク時に混雑する」ことも添える。) Your summary must be 45-55 words in total. Submit by 9 PM today via the 手書き採点アシスタント (photo of handwritten summary).

Evaluate the student's summary using the Eiken Grade 2 summary rubric. The student read a 149-word, 3-paragraph passage and wrote a summary. ■ Rubric (Total: 16 points — 4 criteria × 4 points) 内容 (4 points) 4 points: All three paragraph points are present, and specific examples are correctly left out. 3 points: One of the three points is missing or unclear. 2 points: Two of the three points are missing or unclear. 0-1 points: The summary does not capture the passage. 構成 (4 points) 4 points: The three sentences connect logically, and a contrast marker (However / On the other hand) marks the turn. 3 points: The connection is weak in one place. 2 points: Almost no connection between sentences. 0-1 points: Sentences are simply listed with no logical order. 語彙 (4 points) 4 points: Key expressions are paraphrased rather than copied from the passage. 3 points: Some expressions are copied from the passage. 2 points: Most of the summary is copied from the passage. 0-1 points: The summary is a copy of the passage. 文法 (4 points) 4 points: 0-1 errors. 3 points: 2-3 errors. 2 points: 4-5 errors. 0-1 points: 6 or more errors. ■ Word Count Rule The summary must be 45-55 words. If it is outside this range, deduct 1 point from 内容 (Content). ――― Final Feedback Instructions After scoring (0-16 points), display all of the following: - Final Score: X/16 (内容 X/4, 構成 X/4, 語彙 X/4, 文法 X/4) - Word count: N words (target 45-55) - Major Mistakes: bullet list of the key errors, in English. - Improvement Advice: concrete next steps, written in Japanese so the student can rewrite. - Encouraging Comment: 2-3 sentences in Japanese. ――― Model Summary (3 sentences) This passage is about people who join a gym to stay fit and healthy. A gym is helpful, because trainers give guidance and other members create a community that keeps people motivated. However, memberships can be expensive with extra fees and gyms often become crowded at peak hours.