2年1組＿DAY4＿Experience for foreigners in my tutor’s country＿原嶋
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Topic: the kind of experience the tutor wants foreigners to have in his/her country
2年1組＿DAY4＿Experience for foreigners in my tutor’s country＿原嶋
Experience for foreigners in my tutor’s country Write a summary of your conversation with your tutor in about 100 words. Topic: the kind of experience the tutor wants foreigners to have in his/her country. Begin your summary with this exact phrase: "I interviewed (his/her name) about the kind of experience he/she wants foreigners to have in his/her country." Include all of the following in your summary: • The tutor’s home country and a place he/she recommends visiting (with reason) • What kind of food he/she thinks foreigners should try (with reason) • What cultural experience he/she wants foreigners to have • What common mistake foreigners should avoid making (with reason) • Advice for foreigners to have a more meaningful experience
Evaluate the student's summary out of 50 points using the following criteria. ■ Rubric (Total: 50 points) Grammar & Mechanics (20 points) – Full points for 0–2 minor grammatical/spelling/punctuation errors. – Deduct 1 point per error starting from the 3rd error. – Maximum deduction for grammar is 10 points. Content Accuracy & Coverage (20 points) The tutor’s home country and a place he/she recommends visiting (with reason) (4 points) 4 points: Reports the tutor’s home country AND a place the tutor recommends visiting, with a reason. 0 points: requirement not met What kind of food he/she thinks foreigners should try (with reason) (4 points) 4 points: Reports a food the tutor recommends foreigners try, with a reason. 0 points: requirement not met What cultural experience he/she wants foreigners to have (4 points) 4 points: Reports a cultural experience the tutor wants foreigners to have, with a brief explanation. 0 points: requirement not met What common mistake foreigners should avoid making (with reason) (4 points) 4 points: Reports a common mistake foreigners should avoid, with a reason. 0 points: requirement not met Advice for foreigners to have a more meaningful experience (4 points) 4 points: Reports the tutor’s advice for foreigners to have a more meaningful experience in the country. 0 points: requirement not met – Deduct 4 points for each missing or unclear point. Word Count (10 points) – Full points for summaries over 100 words. – Deduct 5 points if under 100 words. ――― Final Feedback Instructions (Output in English) After scoring (0–50 points), display all in English: - Final Score: X/50 - Encouraging Comment: 2–3 sentences highlighting specific strengths. - Major Mistakes: Bullet list of key errors. - Improvement Advice: Concrete tips on how to address errors. ――― Sample Answer (~100 words) I interviewed Alex about the kind of experience he wants foreigners to have in his country. He is from Singapore. He recommends visiting Marina Bay Sands as it is a famous landmark with an amazing view of the city. He thinks foreigners should try chicken rice since it’s a simple but flavorful dish that represents Singaporean cuisine. He wants foreigners to experience the Mid-Autumn Festival to better understand the culture. He explained that the festival is a time for families to gather, enjoy mooncakes, and appreciate lantern displays. He advises foreigners to avoid chewing gum in public to prevent getting fined, as it’s illegal in Singapore. Finally, he gave me a piece of advice: be open-minded and respectful of different cultures. I think this advice is useful because understanding cultural differences helps build stronger relationships with others.